CHAPTER 1: Detective puts on a mystical mask this grant him, super powers but also send him vision and take of his control. part eight

 This mysterious sinister feel female has weird googly eye goggles that got hypnotically spinning black&white spirals over her glasses both of them, one eyeglass is bigger than another, and she has also head wear looking like cooking colander that has lot tech plugged over it like antennas and the computer parts and heap of wires.

Also she holds some kind of joystick, made for piloting tiny micro-drones.

Here I again jump in and make this more clear like To add clarity on that what was originally on 3D-blog: So basically, this girl were one that make Ilkanath shot himself, just that she get him under her mind control. That hat she wears is actual mind control devise and the goofy- eyewears is part of it set, but there is limits on mind controlling thing;  she can puppeteer only a person that has hypno-chip planted on one’s head.

Also she got like a time-machine powers. And she uses the micro-drone to plant invisible hypno-chip in Ilkanath revolver just moment before, he get idea to play some Russian roulette just for fan. The she just rewind time again and again until Ilkanath shot himself the right way so that hypno-chip got planted at his head.

Doctor says: “Did you somehow survive, that disintegration, and then grow boobs.”

Doctor confuses this girl to her twin brother. These twins: names are Lloyd and Dolly. And they will be recurring enemies from first movie[1].

Next: About the Pray 1, that first movie in this six movie long film series.

Lloyd her brother he was big bad enemy at Pray 1 movie, not main enemy, not that, no he who tear off radio-person’s face, but a first enemy counter at quite beginning of the movie, just to lift up  audiences mood, to make some exciding tension on them.

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[1] Remember this was my movie pitch on my 3D-blog.

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Now whole scenery has Been change so that they are actually in the place where they last time use the podium, doctor, detective and the KeyPerson, not just small mention by A faceless narrator. It is like flashback Now. NOW!! more about the KeyPerson:

KeyPerson that our friends employ to open the podium, stupid! He so stupid, that even he had the  before experience from the two previous summonings,  he forgot to cover the eyes, because this time there was no a person to yell him do to so, like there was before, but because doctor assumes this time now, that the KeyPerson can figure it out himself. Already! So he got badly blinded; now! And he stumbles, this makes him to drop the bottle that he been sipping. It was great future champagne given reward from Doctor for his previous efforts, open the podium moment before, this very case, usually he drinking just future grog.

There in dark future alcoholism is usual misery, for common people, because few pure clean drinking-water exist. In there the waste land world, making clear water is hard also maintain it a super pure so that no nasty microbes start living on it –cause nausea then for drinker, so there is lot of alcohol infused water, because that is the way for making the drinking liquid; Just add future alcohol to a dirty water, so that kills then microbes on it not-so-clean-water, so it don’t cause illness when use it; This concoction of dirty water purified by future alcohol is called future grog. Very popular!

Now! Back in That CASE on the same stand, Where detective have shoots himself just a moment before.

Good Doctor first seems like he was not interested for this –that the detective, his friend shot himself and seemingly drop dead. But now, he seems to care much, he crying, head of detective over his hand palm.

This doctor no evil, he is just low emotionally, the movie[1] showing this, by show when he Doc is very long time alone, in dark, some solitary place and he start weeping like little girl all sad in the world. Just sitting alone his throne then suddenly starts crying. 

And now here name’s of these my characters[2].

On original 3D-blog; I give some advises for fellow writers, here quik synapses of all it:  

1.  There is a website that randomly generate fantasy names: https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/
2. Use some Spreadsheet Software to keep track character in a book, like who is who and what they do.

These are names the dices given:

Name of the Detective is Ed Thorne [3]and Doctor’s name: Dr Pothas Kane

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[1] This part of 3D-blog was originally my awesome idea for a movie.

[2] After an every chapter I palnwill be few small charts where characters are listed, also some extra information.

[3] No more! Ed Thorne too normal for this fiction! And there is actual humans posses that name, so new name for detective: Ilkanath Vaughan I got little help from another name generator https://www.name-generator.org.uk/  Also the imagination; But Ed-Zone and Ed-mask and Ed-force they still conserve their original names.

CHAPTER 1: Detective puts on a mystical mask this grant him, super powers but also send him vision and take of his control. part five

 --You think! I have been shooting my whole life, but actually; I start not but just some month before.

He reloads the revolver while speaks, then some reason he shot himself on head, and it seems like he drop dead.

 Doctor yells:

 --Nobody gives a fuck!

(Doctor is litle bit late, his REACTIONS on the situations, But on the third blog post it will show that HE cares) Next! End of THE second post and introduction of the first KeyPerson:

Anyways, this current KeyPerson, always ask too much for his tasks, also he start running out off his heritage, so they plans to find a new KeyPerson.(nne)[1]

Third post start::, all these post got them specific names on the original 3D-blog, here a collection of all the names of the posts:

Orignalidea2

Orignalidea2part2

Orignalidea2part3

The summoning from these podiums happens this way, form the skies comes big red laser it swap thru area as gather information. Not just one laser, but bunch of them that they turn a whole landscape to a red squared paper, they may check if there is any animals or humans and geography if any inclinations need to level down. Then laser show stops.

Then very rapid missiles fire from skies struck down, with might and great barrage, earthquakes...rumble clouds thunder, it is as like standing inside a big speaker. Everything in impact zone super dead and levelled down, vaporize glass and glass break to the tarmac.

Then the red laser re-appears it takes form of a very big polygon that is bottom edges of the incoming building. Soon from those red edges start oozing black substance that fills that red polygon. So odd is that black substance, hard to identify: Is it liquid? Or black light?

When the black shape is ready and all filled the black liquid from corners to middle, it appearing to be like some kind of hole suddenly, then a thing start arise from it, this black hole seem to be full off some dark gassy material. a thing that bee arise from it looks like black and white sketches of some big building, more it arise more concrete it got, less picture like, except no colours. When this ascending structure stop moving, it stay there for a moment, looking incomplete way that no colours, then massive KaBOOM!!* happens very bright explosion out of it, like several flash bang goes off same time or dozen suns arise. After the light bomb happening this fresh facility is fully functional and polished there are even some yard trees and beatifications like a fountain and protection robot and some transporting vehicles.

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[1](nne)~not native English, I use to add this abbreviation end of every post on 3D-blog, so people don’t rise them the expectation too high.

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You see detective is in big debt; house, detective tools and other things they all has them price, he don’t want regress to homeless wanderer again, he was that long time, just, not so long ago, before, he hate it. He still gets nasty flash pack of that time period. But now he is on big money, He looks a greedy that picture...

Next step of detective’s plan is was originally so bad and unoriginal that it will change before in 3D-blog IT was:

 Because his good friend a doctor has invent new lithium-base cola drink that make user blissfully and also make him more thirsty, so that he want drink more and more. But there is problem on product line, etc. where to get bottles etc. no bottles in wasteland. Here the answer is the magical podium.

But this New version why the detective and his boss needs a podium is, … anything!, use your imagination!, it is not important!, he just need that podium! He need that so much.

They[1] already had one KeyPerson on before, but good doctor accidently pick a wrong, facility from the menu. And KeyPerson got then bare, so they need now another.

Now story goes the place and time where they last time use the podium. It might also be A vision from the mask.

Doctor accidently pick a wrong, facility and he shout angrily[2], this provoke the detective to speak about his favourite subject:

the detective:

--I never do errors, on small things maybe, like long term situations like life choices, but where I aim that I always hit, newer miss newer tumble or fail, it is impossible to me I have edges in my strength and limit in speed, but on those scopes no errors happens, no faulty inside frames that those limits draws.

 For no reason, nobody is never interested the fact that he, the detective, can do no errors, he thinks this is very odd almost more strange that this his skills always success newer faulty. Why? People always ignore this topic; no matter how many times he tries to evoke conversation about this subject.

He like when situation escalate on point where he need school and show his skills, but then soon... “I told you so”

Most interest, here that it was always this way but, not so long ago.

Doctor no response, his talking point but ignore it all and just make the profanity, and anger. Again, detective start “I newer no error”-speak, also choose to show by a example, make little demonstration “look”-- he throws some things on the air then draw a revolver very very fast and shot those objects, while them still falling down, then he continue the talk...

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[1] Doctor and Detective

[2] Good doctor shout because that his mist and click a wrong button and thus select a wrong thing.

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Here this second blog about my idea that is much this story that I post in 3D-blog much reprises... NOW!

I have been thinking why is this kidnapping story very movie like experience? What will elevate it over any other mundane story, where to get those big pointy stakes?  So I came up with this, there is these, ancient artifacts hidden around a wasteland. They are called podiums they look like a slot machine, but got screen like in a computer. And it screen, that has operation system (OS) that is write very forgotten mystical language also it screen is touch screen.

1. Later I throw away this podium experiment an instead that there is different collectable a magical radio person heads, more about them later.
2. More later podiums return in Evil Island saga where there is obelisk of oblivion a great weapon that need two podiums to a work, It is a sailing story where heroes try fishing these podiums out off ancient shipwreck.   

The OS it is also very non-user-friendly, almost like it been made intentionally illogical.  These mysterious podiums hold big power, you see them can summon a forgotten technology, like full working factories with robot-workers and everything.

Not just anybody can use them, but user must be a certain genetic lineage. That goes back to very ancient times. Or it goes over genetic only certain chosen ones can make them to cooperate.

There are three types of these podiums red, blue and green, and every type of podium needs it own Chosen One -- or the key person ~KeyPerson.
So that KeyPerson who can use red can’t use blue or green podium. Unless he or she some super KeyPerson

 There is an awesome book, tells stories those ancient times when podiums were made, and explains it's all.

Also, there is definitely no KeyPerson that is able to use all types of podium. That has never been happened, --like some kind of super super KeyPerson

Every podiums has certain own monetary-system inside it ~or points, and KeyPerson got some those doughs to use its machines summoning editor.

The machine scan a person’s brain and history from worlds databases, then gives that individual only, that much of access and power as he or she is worth.

These podiums so old, that current times only very rare occasions the new KeyPerson is born, to identify these KeyPersonas really arcane task. And cloning is no possible, because it beyond genetics also cant just check DNA and use that to identify KeyPerson just cant it beyond DNA.

But must be a arcane task where use the diagrams on the podium book and puzzle color of eye and longitude of nose and thickness of neck, and many other characters and how they commingle get the right combo.   

Here again the original text on the 3D-blog jump too much, leaving holes in the story so here some light bringing initialization: After it silly mask situation, the new customer the blond speak some and throws then a picture of the lost girl to detective’s desk then she leaves. It is all new case. There was some chat and it all go very well, like normal people do.

When then detective then all his own and peace in his cozy office inspect photo of that girl who been kidnapped, who is actual an adult, he notice that she is definitely KeyPerson, one that can open the blue. And detective has blue podium in a save. He assure it by using his podium book.

Ed has now beginning the podium book later when podiums be diss off his character still carry a book, it is on his persona, but then it will be a magic book where his castle at.  

CHAPTER 1: Detective puts on a mystical mask this grant him, super powers but also send him vision and take of his control. part two

When one use this he need somehow evade dangerous blade that got sling on his direction by balance lost enemy falling on to his direction  this evasive movement must be do by jump over it blase or squatting down or summersault or any fast evasive movement.

  And this is not only the one time trick, but detective use this trick very recurring manner, when he reap enemies and bad guys like a hay,  they newer figure it out, Newer! they are like: 'How? My evil comrade parry the blade, yet he swing him down that is not possible??',

and they look horrified faces them lifeless slices comrade. When It got split There is very bluish background.[1]

Well sometimes they figure it out, but detective just double down it. And hit even harder he catch enemy blasé and hold it while decapitate the enemy

And then they[2] run away. Hero switches LS-sword to a pistol[3] and headshot them all.

 He is so good, that he never do an error[4], but sometimes he do error just because he wonder:

_Why people do, errors, maybe I also make some, there must be some primal reason why no one else than me every time, function optimal._ And then he asks “Are you entertainment”

Some times when he sees an un-perfect action he start questionering reasons for it, just for curiosity, because the “faulty” is so far from him, detective that he is.(nne)[5]

This was where my first post about this science fiction movie idea ends.

And some post later, I return to this idea, you see there was no a macguffin or any plot.

And here still some extra just for this blog:

Usually detective uses LCD-blade that been describe earlier, but later he also use forge-sword that is also laser-blade type sword, but it engine is driven by very soul of it user. It has special stone called soul garnet inside it hilt that is key this soul utilization business: Soul garnet drinking soul of the user and emit then blade but not directly but there is certain tech still between the garnet and forge-blade.

Also later because Ed is shaman, he can evolve LS-Blade to forge-sword in a fly and also devolve it to a key or a pocketknife.

Also Ed feels like he got aura of stagnation and it never feel like breeze when he is around, but it feel like “final” also he can catch enemy’s laser-blade and make it’s hilt to a explode.     

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[1] (There is very bluish background.) Especially In beginning I write all like them be scenery in a movie or like me giving instructions to some cartoonist. Blue background you know like fear. Blue: colour of cold and fear.

[2]foes.

[3] pew* pew* laser/power enegy gun

[4] He is pasically always like Goku is in ultra instinct mode in Dragon Ball Super(DB S), but no super powers, it is not stealing idea because I write this before Goku got (DB S) and I got idea when I was playing Team Fortress 2, so it is basically me.

[5] (nne) not native English speaker: I use this abbreviation lot in beginning when I start blogging, but nowadays I believe my English is good enough to leave it out. 

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Ed and Cute case of Mysterious twins

Chapter 1

This!!, [1]there is private detective, this story start from first sequel, like Star Wars [2]started from fourth. Scenery, wise this scrim post apocalyptic future, few people, city ruins, there is lightsabers, but they only look like lightsabers actually is called liquid-crystal sword LS-sword, it is kind of evolution of LSD[3]. So this detective, sitting behind a desk, he has head statue on that desk that wear human flesh mask.

It is trophy from his last case there was evil man that rip-off his favorite podcaster face, because he, was crazy that way. So he is listening just this very podcaster, it whose face was mutilated earlier, as he playing his newton sphere perpetual motion machine desk decoration, until for some momentary whim, he got idea to try wear it human face skin mask.

Mask had been made so that it does not resemble victim whom is been made at all, but look like made from a non-bleached grey paper pulp When the detective hold it a while as he examine it, as if light goes on it, it  got glowing mystical runes in front. And inside it has now thin blue power barrier electric field, feels tickling electricity on hands, but look like watery cream lotion.

Private detective firmly put mask on now that he started. Those all effects not evoke any hesitate on him at all, and soon he imitates his favourite podcaster, bad lucky for him, when he reach deepest in his silly bit joke just on that same moment a new client opens a door a tall female blond.

Next part was not at all on original serial story[4]:

The detective (Imitating the radio person.):

--[...][5]Fags fags everywhere filthy fags what if Galactic King returns tomorrow[ ...]

Tall female look distrusting worry as detective waging front and back his chair like a retard, spitting angry wrongly remembered wrongly understood half religious rhetoric. She shame it make her blushing. She clear her throat and coughs* she try this hiring to go seamlessly, or whatever there is going on. She thinks: _Maybe I should leave._[6]

The detective is like deep in the meditation:

--[...]Where king then shape his armies, if there is only filth[...]

Longer she there more she shame, she start slowly walking backward.

The original version there was just a note:

These concurrent happenings generate lot of silly, awkward tumbling and misunderstanding.

Because original version was a just movie pitch for those Hollywood Elites notice that I am the real idea guy, one of a billion, story goes a billion miles in a hour, here was originally just story skeletons my somewhat 12 movies long movie universe.

The new case is that some crazy lunatic has kidnap former child star, and hold him on captivity at a some secret, cold cave, he[7] is like 'Heh! heh!(Evil Laugh)

"I keep you here, until you learn to love me.", 
this is not your normal everyday lunatic, but big stakes here. Somehow on this case, very memorably story, he most evil villain or least this criminal is worst person ever, he stain himself on his own excrement and smell bad, but not like all time, but just once only to show how unreasonable and an sympathetic he is.

Next comes cool lightsaber trick [8]that I would totally add, in the movie, as I say already: This novel start just a collection of movie pitches, I pitching my movie universe.

 Also there is a LS-sword trick that when one parries another’s LS-sword, another vastly fast turn it off then flick it back on again after it hilt pass over bad guys LS-sword.

 Thus making it similar that for un-solid for moment, so this way hit through one’s deflecting sword and then slice his body to two. But ....

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[1] When I start the 3D-Blog my skills at the English were much worse than now, for some reason I use then much a “this”-word, for certain authenticity and an artistic choice, I left on this rework many original squirt and typos.

[2] It is Star Wars I believe it is save to tell, but get custom to these hidden text because there is certain “properties” that probably really don’t like see owns name here.

[3] “LCD” I meant LCD not LSD that is Liquid-crystal display.

[4] “Serial Story”? what I mean it was blog a 3D-blog where I put my movie ideas for everybody to a see.

[5] This […] means that person speaks more, this just small portion of that speak.

[6] Inside these:_ _ I write what person thinks.

[7] Evil Bad guy

[8] The cool trick is that, when they always parry swords together in movies and pressing them together, then suddenly turn off it lightsaber... I mean LS-sword, that put rival combatant then out of balance that gives then change to strike.