I been making a book version from pray2, there is time to time need to write whole new text for filling plot chasm, here some neat pick from them not like final form:
Prime is drinking at the closes bar. Then Ed opens the door.
Prime:
-- Why you followed me I not gonna teach you.
There Bar has also bird lord, also lot of other folk big crowd surrounded over these two meaningful fellows. The crowd judge and observe as two at the middle speaks.
Ed:
-- No! I come here merely to mock you in
your old days. I don’t need learn nothing from you I am better than you, and
always be better than you even my very first appearance.
Prime:
--Noo! That is no true!
Hand crosses hand and they and start
wrestling, break a table. Wrestle cross the floor
Bird lord, tap his long pole tap* tap* to
get everybody’s attention.
Bird lord:
--There no need to fight, we can just
summon original just born Ed to here, but there is price to buy for that.
Ed grovels in floor under Primes massive
body, get no breath. They stop fighting.
Ed:
--Sign me in.
Bird lord
--You must give you life to me.
Ed:
--Ok
Bird lord:
--..Let’s first see this movie, in a spell
cloud, it shows you origins.
Behold! Bird lord smoke his staff, big white
cloud that is kind of like movie screen. Then on that appears living colors a
movie. It shows some wasteland, but Prime knows that is not any wasteland it is
the wasteland near the city that he rules, then the city self shortly appears
at there, but then there is like glimmer in the sky, and magic picture start
zoom on it fast.
Those dead at the baddest bar of all
underworld they have seen much not easily impressed, but the next what they see
it totally stuns them. Like hat jumps big leap by surprise and eyes merely pops
out.
Shouts from the ghostly crowd:
--The chromium Egg!!
Yes, The chromium egg soaring thru sky descending
at low angle.
Magic movie goes near it
Shout from the ghostly crowd:
--Show! It from an another side, we want
see what is it’s mark!
Bird wizard:
--It is hard to adjust angle!
But he tries, he is too enthusiastic by the
egg, now it is not so much about Ed’s history when there is chromium egg, that
is greater thing than what they been doing.
In video has too much sun glare so egg
shows like white and it sun blinder it mark from eyes of the bar folk.
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